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Review Detail of Sai_Das in The Fang Pirates

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Sai_Das
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Few chapters so far, but pretty good idea for a story. Grammar is kinda off but not terrible to deal with. Just hoping for more releases soon. There’s also a little bit of a plot hole where you mentioned something about him arriving 16 years ago in that world; Does this mean that he was reincarnated? Or just born that long ago. You can assume from the fact he knew the Kuja pirates that he was reborn but having to make the assumption isn’t always the best. Anyways it’s good so far good work!

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