Review Detail of MissTin in Xiao Mei

This is the author shamelessly reviewing This is my 1st novel and still trying to find the right way to tell a great story Please support me by reading and rating and commenting on my story I really nervous to publish the story it its been occupying my mind and I feel the need to share it with people English is my second language so please bear with my grammatical error I’m aiming for this to be a short story as a start and see how people respond Again please give my novel a chance and enjoy reading!! Thank You