Aweome story. Keep up the excellent work, bro (or sis?). English is great, characters are compelling. Jin Long is such an amazing father figure. The protagonist has a lot of potential too, and I can't wait to see him finally break out on his own. Not sure what's the bit about his mother, that part was confusing because he claims that he didn't see her get killed by the mercenaries, so...okay? But we all know he's gonna destroy them. Maybe.
Xiao_Huoyan
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LIKEI couldn't beleve it when I first saw your review. I seriously thought I was seeing things. You're one of my idols and I absolutely love your book! I just saw your announcement about deleting your book... please don't do it! I love your work and I know that I'm not the only one who does, so please don't delete it!ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππππππππππ
Tomoyuki:Thank you for writing.
Dude...you should be my idol, not the other way around. You write a lot better than me, and I daresay you have a lot more success than I do. Your grasp of the language is far superior, you have a far more interesting plot, you have characters who are much better developed, and I think you have a much bigger fanbase than me (to be fair, that's easy since I don't have any fanbase at all). I have to learn from you. Maybe a fresh start is needed for me, but for now I'll continue to learn from you.
Xiao_Huoyan:I couldn't beleve it when I first saw your review. I seriously thought I was seeing things. You're one of my idols and I absolutely love your book! I just saw your announcement about deleting your book... please don't do it! I love your work and I know that I'm not the only one who does, so please don't delete it!ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππππππππππ
Thank you, but there's no need to delete all of your hard work just because some bastards doesn't like it! I appreciate that you think so highly of me, but don't look down on yourself! You're amazing and I swear I'm not the only one who thinks so!
Tomoyuki:Dude...you should be my idol, not the other way around. You write a lot better than me, and I daresay you have a lot more success than I do. Your grasp of the language is far superior, you have a far more interesting plot, you have characters who are much better developed, and I think you have a much bigger fanbase than me (to be fair, that's easy since I don't have any fanbase at all). I have to learn from you. Maybe a fresh start is needed for me, but for now I'll continue to learn from you.
Xiao_Huoyan:Thank you, but there's no need to delete all of your hard work just because some bastards doesn't like it! I appreciate that you think so highly of me, but don't look down on yourself! You're amazing and I swear I'm not the only one who thinks so!
Your words mean a lot to me too. To hear such positove things from my idol is like a dream! I litterally started crying when I saw that you had posted a review. All of this... everything you've written has made my day!
Tomoyuki:Thank you. Your words mean a lot.
Xiao_Huoyan:Your words mean a lot to me too. To hear such positove things from my idol is like a dream! I litterally started crying when I saw that you had posted a review. All of this... everything you've written has made my day!