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2019-04-01 18:49

If possible I would like someone to write a comment on my novel as I believe it could help me get better as I’m new to this ✌🏻gave myself rating cuz why not

The Blind Saint (Being Rewritten)

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God_Ssamja
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To short every chapter, you must read your own story. Please add more like (,.!? "') for beter be read.......

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zd4zaas
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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zd4zaaa
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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