Review Detail of AwronZizao in Ball Master
Review detail
Quite frankly I think this is a story that could've been enjoyable, if it was written by someone who knew what he/she was actually doing. The grammar is terrible, the story is literally all over the place and you never know what the hell is going on, people don't even know how to socially interact properly or how to use logic. The coach gets mad at the main character for sitting on a bench and massaging his legs..? Saying he's lazy, despite him just playing 3-4 games? Then she finds out that he played 4 games and that's why he's tired and massaging his legs, you know what she does?! SHE MAKES HIM RUN 20 LAPS ANYWAY. WHAT!? He wasn't lazy like you said so, so why is he still being punished? You fucking what?! Where is the logic in that? I literally had to drop it right then and there, because that was utterly ridiculous. It would've been better if the main character said something about him being punished wrongly yet he didn't it's as if being punished for doing good is the most normal thing ever. Hence, that's where I stopped and gave up. Good luck with your story but I can't handle this broken ass stuff.
Ball Master
Daydreamer_5a
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Why are you still reading it?? If you just going to complain about it. "Ha" No one cares if she/he wants the plot goes that way and also stop pointing out the wrong grammars because we don't know if ENGLISH is her/his second language. Also it's pretty good you know. SO SHUT UP BECAUSE YOUR JUST DOING IT FOR "DAILY MISSION".
Are you an absolute clown? First of all, how do you know I'm just doing it for the daily mission? Cause quite frankly, I'm here to read, I could care less about the levels. Also, if it's not their first language, why write a story in English then, you absolute f.ucking troglodyte. Telling me to shut up and talking like a cracked up Hillary Clinton. I can say whatever the goddamn hell I wanna say. If you could actually read properly, you'd realise I said I "DROPPED" the story. You're as thick in the head as the Kardashians are in their ass, I swear to god.
jooNic:Why are you still reading it?? If you just going to complain about it. "Ha" No one cares if she/he wants the plot goes that way and also stop pointing out the wrong grammars because we don't know if ENGLISH is her/his second language. Also it's pretty good you know. SO SHUT UP BECAUSE YOUR JUST DOING IT FOR "DAILY MISSION".
AwronZizao:Are you an absolute clown? First of all, how do you know I'm just doing it for the daily mission? Cause quite frankly, I'm here to read, I could care less about the levels. Also, if it's not their first language, why write a story in English then, you absolute f.ucking troglodyte. Telling me to shut up and talking like a cracked up Hillary Clinton. I can say whatever the goddamn hell I wanna say. If you could actually read properly, you'd realise I said I "DROPPED" the story. You're as thick in the head as the Kardashians are in their ass, I swear to god.
jooNic:Why are you still reading it?? If you just going to complain about it. "Ha" No one cares if she/he wants the plot goes that way and also stop pointing out the wrong grammars because we don't know if ENGLISH is her/his second language. Also it's pretty good you know. SO SHUT UP BECAUSE YOUR JUST DOING IT FOR "DAILY MISSION".