Item: The Darkfallen
Rating: 4.2
Author: robert374

robert374Lv145yr

2019-04-17 03:22

Really enjoy the story, interesting idea and looking forward to new chapters. The only problem might be the sometimes long colloums of text but it can still be read without much of a problem, u guys should definitely give it a try!! . . . . . . (I will probably not update this review and there are currently just 7 chapters released, u get what I mean)

The Darkfallen

ConanAnderson

4.6

229 Chs

Liked by 4 people

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robert374Lv14

On second thought it reminds me of Tokyo ghoul

5yr

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Mayaa_RejekiLv3

This story really really interesting. I can't stop reading and so amazing. I love this. So muxh much. ❤💝❤💓💞💕💓💞💜💗💟💙👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💪💪💪💪 Fighting for author.

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kkkkingLv3

I call bull**** the names are clearly taken from the prototype series, coincidence my ass, there is no f*****g way in hell that the names of BOTH blacklight and blackwatch being coincidental

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phoenixhyperionLv13

The story plot's cool. I don't know why but the introductory chapter is like Code Geass. With the military and all. When Britonnia is mention, (not sure I got the spelling right) I first read it as Britannia. And I thought it's definitely inspired from Code Geass. But the events that unfold prove me wrong. Anyway, I love your story setting! Keep up the good work author!

4yr

JoaryLv12

WARNING!! MEGA SPOILERS!!!! THAT DON'T WARRANT USING THE SPOILER SLIDER!!!!: It's plot is ***HEAVILY*** "inspired" by Tokyo Ghoul. Everyone is here! We have Not-Touka, Not-Rize, Not-Owl, Not-Kaneki, not-Hina, we even have not-Tsuu Takiyama!! There are iconic scenes like the kidnapped by Pervert and put into a gladiator arena arc, Pervert raping the new friends girl in a church and then touka saves MC's ass by whooping PErvert's. point is, this feels like a bad reboot of TG. Also, it is really hard to keep track of who is who, the names are so similar and they get introduced lie 5 at a time and then the scene ends.

5yr

ConanAndersonAuthor

Hi! The author here, I giving all five stars for my own story but this is the best Novel that I writing, it took me almost 6 years to planned and structured this story so please give it a try, if you enjoy reading dark, gritty, violent, military Sci-fi then this is novel for you.

5yr

Bloodsucker619Lv1

Awesome novel... 😊😊😊 Gruesome violence, gore, blood great storyline, everything is perfect. I give all five stars. I know it's early tp make a review but I want more chapters.

5yr

Darklords363Lv1

I really like the story, interesting characters, excellent ideas, full grimdark world with dystopia era, I desperately looking for more chapters...

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Jeep_JerryLv1

I am completely engrossed in your novel! It's a literary masterpiece that deserves far more consideration than it does at the moment. The writing is just outstanding, the plot is deftly constructed, and the characters are masterfully drawn. It's absurd that more people haven't had the opportunity to thoroughly enjoy your work yet. I'm excited to work with you to create a plan to make it more visible and get the recognition it so richly merits. Together, let's design a strategy that will present your art to the world

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