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The_Airojab
The_AirojabLv65yr
2019-04-19 00:40

Individually the chapters have a story but when u read it as a whole you keep changing the facts of the story, the no of plot holes are more than enough to make story within themselves. Although its not a bad fanfic it would be better if you made up your mind and stopped just trying to fill the story randomly.

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