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Raynet
RaynetLv145yr
2019-04-01 14:28

Wow, it os a nice fan fic of one piece, please don't drop this, it has so many originality in it and it is so damn GOOD!!! And yeah he need Harem, but don't make it too much please too many women in Harem sometimes bring the quality down. Ok the writing is nice, little mistake here and there but still very good.

One Piece and the Celestial Dragon

Altara
4.5
68 Chs

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Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

You either want a harem or not. Not many people are able to make good harems so it usually ends up being trash.

5yr
Pierre_UR
Pierre_URLv2

Is harem?

Seikatsu:You either want a harem or not. Not many people are able to make good harems so it usually ends up being trash.
5yr
Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

I think so

Pierre_UR:Is harem?
5yr
Other Reviews
NulZilch
NulZilchLv5

No one would be able to read it after MC shows he is a pathetic loser for boa hancock pu*ssy. I read this story some time before, but didn't leave a review then. Doing it now. He saves boa hancock from slavery, and she's absolute bi*tch to him. She hates him because he's celestial, and unconcerned of her fate(which she should for her sisters sake even if she hates him) she keeps on abusing him and being a bi*tch to him. But MC let's it all go over his basic pride and dignity and grovels in front of her to give him a way to let her stay with him. I have never ever seen such a pathetic display. It's like the auhtor wanted the MC to be as pathetic as possible. All for to make her stay with him and then somehow this loser MC will gain her "love" aka pu*ssy. Congrat for getting your waifu!!! 👏 Now i was not expecting her to su*ck MC. Her position is perfectly reasonable. It's the MC pathetic attempts to desperately make boa stay with him. The sheer amount of grovelling, spinelessness, and patheticness was tangible. It looked like he'll die if she didn't stay with him. I don't know what kind of readers can keep on reading the fic after this, but looks like many did and keep on highly rating it. All i can say for them is, good you got your waifu one way or another. The OC fruit, and the "twist" of having the loser celestial family being actually competent and all the time they were just pretending to be retarded is distasteful as well. And MC will go pirate route as well. Nothing original.

5yr

GGMissFortune
GGMissFortuneLv6

OG logia fruit that has more weaknesses than yami yami no mi and comes with sh1ttier powers.... at least yami yami no mi can cancel out other devil fruits MC can't even use his fruit's power easily.....

5yr
NobleKei
NobleKeiLv14

And Extremely good Novel. Good Character Development, Good Plot Idea, Good Plot Progression (tho that needs a but more chapters to confirm). But Most Importantly, The Writing Quality Isn't Shit! Its Good! (A little bit of Grammatical errors here and there, but not really that prominent). Im Sick of Bad Quality Novels! Even though some of the stories are really good, It Feels like im gonna Die of Cancer! This Novel Deserves 5 stars. One of the best One Piece Fanfics ive seen in a while.

5yr
Luna588
Luna588Lv1

Fantastically written...............................i love it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Great author!!!................................... I‘m curious what‘s to come....i will support you!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍.................................................

5yr
AraAra
AraAraLv11

Only a few errors in grammar, and for plots? 1 word from me, very good

5yr
TimeIguess
TimeIguessLv12

i love everything about this story. I love his grandfather and the way they interact. I love how he acts like hes the mc of a eastern fantasy. I love his devil fruit ability(s) and how he has to actually train unlike some stupid devil fruits. Its almost like hes luffy that has to train to make his devil fruit useful. I cant wait to see his adventures and how he interacts with pirates marines and other celestial dragons. PLEASE DONT DROP AUTHOR THIS STORY IS AMAZING.

5yr
oXOBUNNYOXo
oXOBUNNYOXoLv11

Extremely good ☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️

5yr
kobeblackmamba
kobeblackmambaLv7

good one...............................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,////////////////////////////////////////////////...................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,///////////////////////

5yr
Marsjm23
Marsjm23Lv4

I love the start of the story and how the grandpa spoiled the mc... dont drop this... ******************wweeewe ******************wweeewe ******************wweeewe ******************wweeewe ******************wweeewe ******************wweeewe

5yr
holson_Charles
holson_CharlesLv15

Reveal spoiler

5yr
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