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2019-04-01 00:19

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NulZilch
NulZilchLv5

No one would be able to read it after MC shows he is a pathetic loser for boa hancock pu*ssy. I read this story some time before, but didn't leave a review then. Doing it now. He saves boa hancock from slavery, and she's absolute bi*tch to him. She hates him because he's celestial, and unconcerned of her fate(which she should for her sisters sake even if she hates him) she keeps on abusing him and being a bi*tch to him. But MC let's it all go over his basic pride and dignity and grovels in front of her to give him a way to let her stay with him. I have never ever seen such a pathetic display. It's like the auhtor wanted the MC to be as pathetic as possible. All for to make her stay with him and then somehow this loser MC will gain her "love" aka pu*ssy. Congrat for getting your waifu!!! 👏 Now i was not expecting her to su*ck MC. Her position is perfectly reasonable. It's the MC pathetic attempts to desperately make boa stay with him. The sheer amount of grovelling, spinelessness, and patheticness was tangible. It looked like he'll die if she didn't stay with him. I don't know what kind of readers can keep on reading the fic after this, but looks like many did and keep on highly rating it. All i can say for them is, good you got your waifu one way or another. The OC fruit, and the "twist" of having the loser celestial family being actually competent and all the time they were just pretending to be retarded is distasteful as well. And MC will go pirate route as well. Nothing original.

holson_Charles
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