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lolsolow
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Garbage. Dialogues have 0 depth in them, they feel so empty and boring. No feeling, emotions or thoughts. You can't feel them. It's like puppets or robots are talking. Naruto feel conflicts with himself and Naruto isn't actually Naruto because I refuse to believe this is him. He just wrote Naruto wrong.

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Golden Dawn (Naruto X Justice League)

EternalBliss4U

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Daoist198784
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he killed kakuzu?

EternalBliss4U:You must have watched filler. Go back and see the Pain part again. It is also confirmed in the novels that Naruto never takes Killing missions and puts other in danger by becoming soft. Tell me one person that he has killed. Do you know why Sai and Shika had to do that mission as adults instead of just sending Naruto to kill. It's because he won't kill. This is Shikamaru shinden episode and it is also mentioned Kakashi shinden where he let an enemy escape. No matter how much u check there is no proof of Naruto ever killing a person after Pain arc before that he was definitely willing to kill. He can control the affects of his rasengan so it does small to maximum damage.
EternalBliss4U
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How did i write Naruto wrong?

lolsolow
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Naruto might be a softie who goes let's be friends to villains but he doesn't have much problem with killing that he says ''we have a problem if you kill'' (I don't remember the full sentence) He killed various times in the series, he himself witnessed more of them.

EternalBliss4U
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You must have watched filler. Go back and see the Pain part again. It is also confirmed in the novels that Naruto never takes Killing missions and puts other in danger by becoming soft. Tell me one person that he has killed. Do you know why Sai and Shika had to do that mission as adults instead of just sending Naruto to kill. It's because he won't kill. This is Shikamaru shinden episode and it is also mentioned Kakashi shinden where he let an enemy escape. No matter how much u check there is no proof of Naruto ever killing a person after Pain arc before that he was definitely willing to kill. He can control the affects of his rasengan so it does small to maximum damage.

lolsolow:Naruto might be a softie who goes let's be friends to villains but he doesn't have much problem with killing that he says ''we have a problem if you kill'' (I don't remember the full sentence) He killed various times in the series, he himself witnessed more of them.
EternalBliss4U
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Pain was the person he hated the most, tell me why didn't he kill him. Remember he didn't know that Pain will bring the people back to life

lolsolow:Naruto might be a softie who goes let's be friends to villains but he doesn't have much problem with killing that he says ''we have a problem if you kill'' (I don't remember the full sentence) He killed various times in the series, he himself witnessed more of them.
EternalBliss4U
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You can check chapter 448

Woshi
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For anyone seeing this review and reading the comments I implore you to try out the novel rather than basing off whether to read it or not due to a pretty small issue.

DolphinMan
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Oh idk maybe because that wasn't his real body dip****

EternalBliss4U:Pain was the person he hated the most, tell me why didn't he kill him. Remember he didn't know that Pain will bring the people back to life
DolphinMan
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As well as his master still having faith in pain even after what he did, i swear you know nothing of naruto.

DolphinMan:Oh idk maybe because that wasn't his real body dip****
EternalBliss4U
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Are you actually serious? I am talking about his time with Nagato. If you knew Naruto you would realize that chapter number given is when Naruto was talking to Nagato and says i will not kill you because that is not what Naruto is about. You really should stop commenting since you have zero knowledge on this series while i go back and forth to see things when i am writing.

DolphinMan:Oh idk maybe because that wasn't his real body dip****
EternalBliss4U
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You should re-read the manga before making statements. Just to remind you of his character, you can go watch the Last Movie. You are saying he will kill when necessary, sorry to tell you that's not true. Nagato aka Pain Died by using the rebirth technique Obito died by saving Naruto after Naruto had already sympathized with him and forgiven him. Could have killed him before fighting Kaguya. It's not like he knew about the plot and thought i will save him to be a plot device for later. Toneri was about to destroy the planet and take away his girl but Naruto didn't kill him. Naruto saved him from dying. You can through all the manga after the talk with Nagato and no where you will find Naruto killing anyone. Anime is non canon. I also thought like that before the reading the official novels continuing after the war where its clearly mentioned by Kakashi and other characters that Naruto's personality is an issue. He won't kill and we can't send him on delicate missions that require assassination, this led to Shikamaru and Sai almist dying on a mission. Kakashi shinden and Shikamaru shinden The only reason i think you guys are confused is his attitude towards the aliens. You do realize that just goes against his ideals and pretty much plot because after he matured Naruto tried to understand everyone but didn't even try with the Otsutsuki. He didn't ask why they did it? Was there way they could come to an agreement? No, he tried to kill them because they tried to kill them. Very logical except this is Naruto who said he won't kill because that's not what Naruto is about. After killing an alien he continues to hold back against humans again.

DolphinMan:Oh idk maybe because that wasn't his real body dip****
DolphinMan
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also at that time wasn't naruto hurt as **** how could he kill him if he didn't let him

EternalBliss4U:Are you actually serious? I am talking about his time with Nagato. If you knew Naruto you would realize that chapter number given is when Naruto was talking to Nagato and says i will not kill you because that is not what Naruto is about. You really should stop commenting since you have zero knowledge on this series while i go back and forth to see things when i am writing.
DolphinMan
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I wasn't backing this guy, your both wrong he didn't kill anybody because there was never a reason to till the show ended with all the drama **** going down with him always fleeing

EternalBliss4U:You should re-read the manga before making statements. Just to remind you of his character, you can go watch the Last Movie. You are saying he will kill when necessary, sorry to tell you that's not true. Nagato aka Pain Died by using the rebirth technique Obito died by saving Naruto after Naruto had already sympathized with him and forgiven him. Could have killed him before fighting Kaguya. It's not like he knew about the plot and thought i will save him to be a plot device for later. Toneri was about to destroy the planet and take away his girl but Naruto didn't kill him. Naruto saved him from dying. You can through all the manga after the talk with Nagato and no where you will find Naruto killing anyone. Anime is non canon. I also thought like that before the reading the official novels continuing after the war where its clearly mentioned by Kakashi and other characters that Naruto's personality is an issue. He won't kill and we can't send him on delicate missions that require assassination, this led to Shikamaru and Sai almist dying on a mission. Kakashi shinden and Shikamaru shinden The only reason i think you guys are confused is his attitude towards the aliens. You do realize that just goes against his ideals and pretty much plot because after he matured Naruto tried to understand everyone but didn't even try with the Otsutsuki. He didn't ask why they did it? Was there way they could come to an agreement? No, he tried to kill them because they tried to kill them. Very logical except this is Naruto who said he won't kill because that's not what Naruto is about. After killing an alien he continues to hold back against humans again.
EternalBliss4U
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Naruto wasn't hurt. He let Nagato hurt him. Go and read the damn chapter.

DolphinMan:also at that time wasn't naruto hurt as **** how could he kill him if he didn't let him
DolphinMan
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The anime was so boring i skip every dialogue i could and i watched it like four years ago

EternalBliss4U:Naruto wasn't hurt. He let Nagato hurt him. Go and read the damn chapter.
Clwxui
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Friend, it is very annoying that you make a story only about "Naruto", I would love it if you made a novel about a reincarnated person, different from Naruto, and you molded the character yourself.

EternalBliss4U:Naruto wasn't hurt. He let Nagato hurt him. Go and read the damn chapter.
EternalBliss4U
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Reading this made me think of a story modeled around my life with some magic and it looked interesting so maybe i will write it later.

Clwxui:Friend, it is very annoying that you make a story only about "Naruto", I would love it if you made a novel about a reincarnated person, different from Naruto, and you molded the character yourself.
jhsilver
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Naruto did kill that guy called Yūra during Gaara's rescue arc Naruto killed him with a Big Ball Rasengan. Anyways I just wanted to ask is your Naruto not going to kill at all or only when he has no choice?

EternalBliss4U:Reading this made me think of a story modeled around my life with some magic and it looked interesting so maybe i will write it later.
EternalBliss4U
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I already said that but you see that's before the pain arc. I am saying his personality became tooo shitty idealistic after the death of Jiraiya. In this story Naruto will change and learn things properly since i am not trying to write a saint. I don't agree with canon Naruto personality since its unrealistic but i am writing it in a proper way instead of ignoring it like most people do and building upon it. People change and change takes time. in this story you don't have to worry about such things messing up the plot since Naruto uses his brains for proper solutions.

jhsilver:Naruto did kill that guy called Yūra during Gaara's rescue arc Naruto killed him with a Big Ball Rasengan. Anyways I just wanted to ask is your Naruto not going to kill at all or only when he has no choice?
EternalBliss4U
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Its better to decide after checking out some chapters. Killing won't miraculously make the story better so just go with an open mind and see if its something you want to read or not. He will kill eventually when there is no choice.

jhsilver:Naruto did kill that guy called Yūra during Gaara's rescue arc Naruto killed him with a Big Ball Rasengan. Anyways I just wanted to ask is your Naruto not going to kill at all or only when he has no choice?
jhsilver
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Thanks, I was just worried that he would meet someone like the joker and just decide to forgive him. You're doing a great job though better than many other works on this website

EternalBliss4U:Its better to decide after checking out some chapters. Killing won't miraculously make the story better so just go with an open mind and see if its something you want to read or not. He will kill eventually when there is no choice.