Writing Quality Using personal pronoun ; third person style is likely. Stability of Updates Actually , in many cases we all have busy days so I personally do not upload daily but If I can I will do it. So the stability is not a musts. Story Development The flow of your story is good and some scenarios are cliché. But the twist seems to change phase afterwards so It is catchy. Character Design The progress of your MC transmigrating was basically like from a Con-artist to a noble like woman who tried to fit in but at the same time wanted to run away. World Background The explanation in some scenarios are kind of confusing but other than that the foundation of your book is nice. Keep writing! You are doing a good job!
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