Review Detail of NebulousArcana in Super Gene: Domination

I honestly love 'Super Gene' its a good pass time. And finding this fan fic was a nice surprise given how heavy on SS the updates were getting but thats besides the point. This is an ok read, bearable protag, and not the usual lazy writing I can actually feel excitement for what the MC will be able to do later down the line. That in itself is enough to atleast try and push for updates Although this isn't a master piece in the making it still has value being based where it is, and its a nice perspective shift from the original story. I can see a multitude of plot holes popping up since Han Sen doesn't have the Black Crystal namely Little Angel, Growler etc.. not evolving when they should have, helping him train in the technique he found in the crystilizer control room and it basically setting the time frame for when Han Sen moved to the 2nd Gods Sanctuary back by alot it can still be mended with a few care packages dropped by this new MC. I don't particularly care whether the story in the backdrop goes exactly how its supposed to but it'd be nice if Han Sen still got to have his kids, their too adorable. <3 Tips; I don't mind the system bit since its just a glaring way to avoid a few adventures and just keep growth at a steady pace but don't go overboard with its functions. Try to describe character appearances more often otherwise we're left with blank figures expositing the current situations with no real clear image on how they impact the enviroment by being there. i.e Didn't know the guy had a huge hammer before he swung it. Also I undertand the need to cling to certain main story events to keep some semblance of the time line intact but by having him cling to every oppertunity to get a beast soul he doesn't need when he could be elsewhere training or hunting kinda defeats the purpose of the system and the MC's IQ also having him going to blackhawk purley for hand of god and familiarity is just a big nono for what you want him to accomplish in future