So far I like what I see. The plot is moving a little too slow for my tastes but I understand that is the way your writing works. Usually on fanfiction novels the authors skip over a lot of details and even character insight and development, thats why you see for example a Naruto fanfiction where the author goes from the waves arc to shipuden in less than 30 chapters. This author on the other hand is taking his time to develop the story without even entering the main timeline of the original story. All in all its pretty good.
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