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EternalBliss4U
EternalBliss4UAuthor3yrEternalBliss4U

This story will be written in a serious manner and will cover everything. If you have read Naruto and Boruto then you know the problems with both stories, poor world building and childish outlook of the world. Boruto's problems: Childish outlook, disrespect of old characters, discarding old settings, no real progression of old characters, nonsense implementation of plot and poor understanding of power levels. In this story we will try to fix these problems. I don't think my writing ability is good enough but I will try it out since the real story annoys me. I had intended to do this with Naruto but now let's just do it from here. Old characters will have realistic progression. Powers and such that were introduced in Naruto era will progress and exist in this story. The Naruto world will be explored through the children and the adults. There will be events that are just violent and others that are not. The villains will be properly established instead of looking like throw away villains from cartoons. The story focuses on both sides, children and *****. In this story I will not use powers or things that are impossible for the Naruto verse. Everything that will be introduced is possible for them and the power levels and abilities are all possible by the characters in question. E.g. Naruto, most people are unaware that even in Canon Naruto has passed the Planet level long ago. From the moment the Last Naruto movie came, Naruto had actually become a planet level fighter. Most people are ignorant of things that took place or completely deny it because of bias. He destroyed a barrier that would survive the moon getting destroyed without any issue. He used a rasengan on it, in his BSM from. BSM form is lower than the SPSM form and rasengan is his normal attack, not his best. Scale them and you will find at least Planet level SPSM Last Naruto while Hokage Naruto is 14 years older than him, so he is at least Large Planet level. Power wise the characters moved but the battles don't show it and the characters didn't learn anything new. Think about it realistically, you know world ending threats will come for you and you learn nothing new. So in this story we will fix that problem and characters will have advanced in power to the max. Naruto’s Powers: Six Paths Rasengan Rasenshuriken TSB Bijuudama Flight Teleportation Atomic dismantling Barrier Elemental Control Reality warping: Izanagi and creation of all things are reality warping abilities so if you build upon these as foundation, you can greater control over reality. Gravity Control Space Control: Obito, Kaguya Healing Time control: Madara's EMS in the game has time reversal and acceleration ability. Regen Baryon Mode Sealing: I open to suggestions and questions so comment it on the chapters or here. I am always checking them out when I am on the site.

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senkii
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[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Anown
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my mind still cant handle huge plot change unless its a si. but i will keep this in my library incase i change my mind. havent read yet. [img=recommend]

EternalBliss4U
EternalBliss4UAuthorEternalBliss4U

The plot in the start is the same as the Boruto anime and manga but in more sensible manner. Try the first 3 chapters and see.

Anown:my mind still cant handle huge plot change unless its a si. but i will keep this in my library incase i change my mind. havent read yet. [img=recommend]
PridefulRoyalty
PridefulRoyaltyLv12PridefulRoyalty

Author, i think i read this story on Fanfiction.net, was that yours? I only actually read chapter one and both are very similar, just wondering

EternalBliss4U:The plot in the start is the same as the Boruto anime and manga but in more sensible manner. Try the first 3 chapters and see.
EternalBliss4U
EternalBliss4UAuthorEternalBliss4U

Yes

PridefulRoyalty:Author, i think i read this story on Fanfiction.net, was that yours? I only actually read chapter one and both are very similar, just wondering
Justmethinking
JustmethinkingLv3Justmethinking

After naruto ended, I read the first few chapters of boruto and was so freaking dissapointed I never touched that again. I'm going to read this with hope you fanfic atleast gives justice to the original characters of naruto who deserve more than they what they where treated as in boruto.

EternalBliss4U
EternalBliss4UAuthorEternalBliss4U

How is it? Hope it's not bad.

Justmethinking:After naruto ended, I read the first few chapters of boruto and was so freaking dissapointed I never touched that again. I'm going to read this with hope you fanfic atleast gives justice to the original characters of naruto who deserve more than they what they where treated as in boruto.