Review Detail of Veronica8 in Chimera Girl

Only three chapters in, so this review is only up to this point. The story gave me an old classic vibe of fantasy-adventure stories authors published back in the early 1900 with a bit of ***** humour thrown in. The technical side of writing is pretty good. A few grammar slips, but nothing that stopped my reading flow. MC comes across as cocky and smart, but not OP. The descriptions of the scientists were good. I found it lacked a bit in the world description area, especially between the transition of the two worlds. Doesn't need a lot, but a bit more so a clueless reader like myself has a gist of the places. Like buzzing lights, smells, droning noises. All in all. Good start. Keep writing.