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dusty_angel
dusty_angelLv45yr
2019-04-07 01:20

Wow, such a refreshing story! I found myself giggling at nearly every chapter! Don't be put off by the cover or title because it isn't similar to most novels on WN. This book is a true gem. Warning though, if you aren't into mature content, do not read. Writing: 4/5 The author's writing style is very strong. There is a clear, comical voice that matches the story very well. The only reason why I'm giving it a four star is because there can be typos found in every chapter. It's just small slip ups, but could be improved with just a bit of proofreading. Stability: 5/5 This book has received an update almost every day since its publish date. Kudos to the author. Story Development: 5/5 The plot is so interesting! There are twists everywhere. You can never guess what will happen next. This story will leave you wanting more. Character Design: 5/5 I love, love the MC! She's so hilarious! The side characters so far are also intriguing! Their reactions and interactions are so fresh and fun. World Background: 4/5 The only reason I gave this a four star is because there can be more explaining to do, but this is to be expected because the story is still in its early stages. So far the world is quite fascinating. Can't wait to learn more about it!

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PeachyPearl
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I thought I'll just read the first ten chapters or so but I just couldn't stop myself once I started. Your novel was that good. Appreciative. From the plot, the writing quality to world background all was really nicely set. Yes there were a few glitches but not as much as to hinder the process of reading. The character design, according to my personal opinion, needs a little polishing. Overall it deserves my attention and I'm happily reviewing it while keeping it in my library. Keep it up author.

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DriftingCloud123
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Wow, I expected some comedy after reading the synopsis, and I was not disappointed. The whole story has a casual tone that makes this novel a refreshing read that goes very well with the comedy. At first, it may seem like one of those comedies where the author relies too much on strong words and insults, but the reality is far from it. Yes, the novel uses insults and some sexual jokes ( there are also many jokes without them) but they don't feel overly used and fit perfectly well with the mc personality. This is a good read for anyone who wants to take a break from the serious tone of the story they are reading and want to just have a good laugh.

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Blankzheet
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Wow! Just wow! Gives me a sort of Douglas Adams vibe. A great read that leaves you wanting more. A beautiful story and funny as well, I wish I could give you 10 in everything! Love your work and hope to read more!

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PsyberRose
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This is the first fantasy novel I read in Webnovel and it's certainly an eye-opener. At the time of writing, the novel has 15 chapters and I'm still wondering what's happening - not in a bad way. I just mean that I'm wondering what the future holds for MC. The plot is slowly unfolding. Writing Quality: It's great and any mistakes are negligible to me. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith Story Development: The pace is nice and slow but not too slow. The best thing about this novel is its unique humour which is very realistic and humane. Author is constantly teasing with hints dropped here and there, and will need to wait for more chapters in order to find out what's truly happening. It's gripping so far. Character Design & World Background: Love it. MC is hilarious and human (realistically written) and the side-kicks and other characters that she meets are all wonderfully written. Overall, a truly enjoyable read. All the best, Author!

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GrumpyNeighbor
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After brushing up on my knowledge of mythical creatures (thanks Google!), I found myself enjoying the chapters. Glad I picked up this novel when I was looking for a light read. Unfortunately, the Nelda in me wanted to cause trouble too. I do look forward to seeing more sides of Nelda.

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J_Tyler
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**Early Review-Updates will follow as story progresses** So I have to say that I am not the type of person that enjoys reading stories with a very mature tone and content, but the hilarious way of thinking and speaking of our MC really won me over. I can't say that I'll enjoy what will inevitably be x rated content, but that's a personal taste, not universal. From a purely objective perspective I would recommend anyone give this a try to see if it's for you, because the comedy is witty and well written. Timing is important in humor and the Author nails it. I'm very impressed, and look forward to more. If I were to offer constructive criticism it would just be one point that we all struggle with: Find consistency in your voice. Find a way to portray thoughts of the characters, and "emotes" we'll say in a consistent manner. That is the worst thing I can say about the story. It's wonderful.

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good read. a book where an office drone becomes a priest in another world. The writing is good, the characterization is good, and the dialogue rocks.

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I'm rooting for this novel even though it only has a few chapters, would like to have more chapters uwu that's all haha pretty good writing just keep it up

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