I'm not good at reviews, but I mean I liked the story so far, I've probably been reading to many op protagonists recently so it felt weird not seeing him kick ass immediately but he is pretty strong obviously still, the thing that really had an affect on me was mostly naruto using his body on the girls......felt wrong to me but it pretty much stops so eyy, the writings pretty good in my opinion, the characters are written good, I mean I hate drama cause it can get annoying in stories but it hasnt really gotten like that yet sooo, I believe the story's going in a good path so far but i could be dumb and not understanding where things are going so 🤷♂️, wth am I suppose to say about world building it's from a ore established world, I mean the author seems to be using it well and from what I've seen so far is fitting it well into the other worlds they added so is good I guess Chao~
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Could you explain better what you meant by "Naruto using his body on girls"?
well it doesn't really matter anymore since he did a rewrite but I mean you could just read the original story too to see it, bit if memory serves right he took over his body to give the girls massive pleasure since Danny couldn't really do it, he also was pretty much the one in control most of the time with jazz
AleccrimD:Could you explain better what you meant by "Naruto using his body on girls"?
it's still in this story, all of volume one was the original and volume two is the reboot, it shows the volumes in the chapter selector
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It's really weird and unnecessary if Naruto actually took control of his body for this °-° . I will read the rewritten version.
TheDNAlien:it's still in this story, all of volume one was the original and volume two is the reboot, it shows the volumes in the chapter selector
Thanks, bro. I found. You helped me a lot.
TheDNAlien:it's still in this story, all of volume one was the original and volume two is the reboot, it shows the volumes in the chapter selector
