Review Detail of zbeez80 in Young Miss, Please Don't Run *Deleted*

I like the story idea just need more attention to deteles I fell as it mis something in how it's express the filling of the characters especially on main thing and that is why Das the male lead like the main character I want it to be more clear especially since it's a love novel this things need to be expressed more clearly, I also can't get the MC personality yet I will read to see if it will improve.