Review Detail of thak in Ms. Attractive and inciting CEO

This is an amazing read... And very well developed. The only slight drawback is the language: there are mistakes here and there. However, the strengths of this novel more than make up for it. Also, though i doubt this has anything to do with this novel specifically, but why can't i comment? The comment box never seems to load for this novel but not so for the other novels (making me doubt that this is a net connection problem, else all updates and uploads would take long)... Author, do you know what i can do about this? Or anyone have any suggestions?