Review Detail of Pandoraaa in Ms. Attractive and inciting CEO

Item: Ms. Attractive and inciting CEO
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

PandoraaaLv55yrPandoraaa

I have only read a few chapters and I think that this is a pretty good novel. Although Just don't really know about how much the author updates it is probably fine. The two things that I might have a problem with is the grammar and how you explain where the character's are. Like "the guy on the sofa warned Jean"....... this is very vague and I have no idea who the man on the couch is. This is an honest critique and NOT a hate or troll review.

Ms. Attractive and inciting CEO

Har_V

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ArucosplayerLv10Arucosplayer

This is a very helpful review. I think the author needs an editor who’ll help her with those mistakes.

5yr

PandoraaaLv5Pandoraaa

I agree

Arucosplayer:This is a very helpful review. I think the author needs an editor who’ll help her with those mistakes.

5yr

Har_VAuthorHar_V

Hello, I am author Really thanks for your open critique. I will try to eloborate my characters and develop my grammar well. Please continue to read my novel to see the developments. I am just 18 and english is not my first language so I am still in improvising stage THANK YOU. For my first review

5yr

Har_VAuthorHar_V

And my updates will be 4-5 per day if I am free of exams or projects and 2-3 atmost in my busy schedule.😊

5yr