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trueimmortal
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This is a great story the story has two worlds bleach and highschool dxd but they don't clash like some of the other mashup fanfics i read so keep up the good work author also love your mc's personality. This is a suggestion: Can you add some to love ru characters to this fanfic golden darkness and lala would be nice.

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This world is out to get me, I am sure of it! (DxD X Bleach X OP)

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Way ahead of you, I already have a plan as to how to add them [img=recommend]

trueimmortal
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Has expected of you great minds think alike

kingCH:Way ahead of you, I already have a plan as to how to add them [img=recommend]
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True, any other series you would like to see? I was even thinking on Fate, possibly on the Heaven's Feel arc but where Shirou goes to the bad end when he saves the world in exchange for Sakura, but during this process the corrupted grail become so destructive that a hole in dimensions is opened and Sakura and the others there are all transfered to the world Ace is ay

trueimmortal:Has expected of you great minds think alike
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well i think a highschool dxd fanfic with a hxh system would be nice. Your idea is also okay but i'm not really a shirou fan i think sending archer to that world would be better or just send gilgamesh with all is power taken away in exchange for a system.

kingCH:True, any other series you would like to see? I was even thinking on Fate, possibly on the Heaven's Feel arc but where Shirou goes to the bad end when he saves the world in exchange for Sakura, but during this process the corrupted grail become so destructive that a hole in dimensions is opened and Sakura and the others there are all transfered to the world Ace is ay
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I also would like to suggest a jojo fanfic .

kingCH:True, any other series you would like to see? I was even thinking on Fate, possibly on the Heaven's Feel arc but where Shirou goes to the bad end when he saves the world in exchange for Sakura, but during this process the corrupted grail become so destructive that a hole in dimensions is opened and Sakura and the others there are all transfered to the world Ace is ay
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I am listening

trueimmortal:I also would like to suggest a jojo fanfic .
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I think the mc if the joj fanfic should have a gacha system that gives him stands in exchange for gold if i had to choose a world i'd choose a world with people who have a broken power level. Also make it so that the system trolls the mc classic money eating troll system. suggestions for worlds to go to: dc Nasuverse dragon ball random wuxia world uq holder etc

kingCH:I am listening
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How about in a world like DxD or something like that but with the MC having this Jojo system? honestly speaking I was torn in the start between a Jojo or One Piece system to work with but either work just fine for me

trueimmortal:I think the mc if the joj fanfic should have a gacha system that gives him stands in exchange for gold if i had to choose a world i'd choose a world with people who have a broken power level. Also make it so that the system trolls the mc classic money eating troll system. suggestions for worlds to go to: dc Nasuverse dragon ball random wuxia world uq holder etc
trueimmortal
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What about a fusion between dxd and uq holder and fate .

kingCH:How about in a world like DxD or something like that but with the MC having this Jojo system? honestly speaking I was torn in the start between a Jojo or One Piece system to work with but either work just fine for me
trueimmortal
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But if you have a hard time choosing a system just do what that one author did when he fused two systems somewhere in the story but make sure that the power level of the mcs opponents are scaled with his so that he doesn't turn into a overpowered mc because it might mess the whole thing up depending on what type of story your writing. My opinion is that a story where the mc one shots everybody is boring one of the reason i like your book is the mc isn't too overpowered but he's not too weak ethir the mix is just right,

kingCH:How about in a world like DxD or something like that but with the MC having this Jojo system? honestly speaking I was torn in the start between a Jojo or One Piece system to work with but either work just fine for me
kingCH
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Yeah, I was honestly thinking on, when Ace unlocks his magic,his system gets an update that will come in handy since the enemies will start showing up soon and they are no joking matter as some will get huge buffs. Like the Espada all having the second transformation, or have Aizen actually use his BANKAI. the problem is figuring out what magic system (which world) I should use for the update of the system. I was honestly thinking of perhaps Magi or Fate, guess time will tell

trueimmortal:But if you have a hard time choosing a system just do what that one author did when he fused two systems somewhere in the story but make sure that the power level of the mcs opponents are scaled with his so that he doesn't turn into a overpowered mc because it might mess the whole thing up depending on what type of story your writing. My opinion is that a story where the mc one shots everybody is boring one of the reason i like your book is the mc isn't too overpowered but he's not too weak ethir the mix is just right,
trueimmortal
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Use the Uq holder world

kingCH:Yeah, I was honestly thinking on, when Ace unlocks his magic,his system gets an update that will come in handy since the enemies will start showing up soon and they are no joking matter as some will get huge buffs. Like the Espada all having the second transformation, or have Aizen actually use his BANKAI. the problem is figuring out what magic system (which world) I should use for the update of the system. I was honestly thinking of perhaps Magi or Fate, guess time will tell
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Fairy tail is also okay Also if you’re going to have a arc with the vampire faction add Yukihime A.K Evangline McDowell but make it so that she has a sister so one can look like her Loli form and the other one will look like her ***** form

kingCH:Yeah, I was honestly thinking on, when Ace unlocks his magic,his system gets an update that will come in handy since the enemies will start showing up soon and they are no joking matter as some will get huge buffs. Like the Espada all having the second transformation, or have Aizen actually use his BANKAI. the problem is figuring out what magic system (which world) I should use for the update of the system. I was honestly thinking of perhaps Magi or Fate, guess time will tell