I don't care that the mc is weak or he is plaything but do you really have to write like that,with all that swearing and random sentences it make the story bad.

great story, I hope Ace finally gets the mere mere not me, for the harem I vote for Mio, Maria, Yuki, Kurumi, Chisato, Asia, Xenovia, Irina, Jeanne, Le Fay Pendragon, Ingvild Leviathan, Lisa, Momo, Reya and ravel and valerie

MC is too weak to be mingling with boss-level characters. At least get him some insurance to fight them off. It is utterly unbelievable how he is still alive, where he could have died just with that interaction with Sirzechs.

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Great story for some but for me it got to exotic in the real lemon scene so not my thing....for most its probably up there "back-ally" if you get my drift [cough] "The readers aren't blind, whether a book is good or not isn't something that can be affected just because someone scolded about it, right? A good book isn't afraid of scoldings, and bad books don't have scoldings." -A wise translator-

MC is Fucking slave. .. .. .He is doesn't want to be peerage but instead want to be contracted magician .. .. .. It is a same damned slave. .. .. Your Fucking author is sure like to be a slave that much

excellent story, I like how you develop the character (Ace for the victory), I can not wait to see the chaos that will cause, especially with the bleach and dxd arcs, as well as those of Testament, I hope you give him the Mera Mera no My as lodge, I mean Ace would not be complete if he does not have it, especially to see the reaction of the phenex clan to the power of said fruit hahahaha, in my opinion for the harem you should choose Lisa (bleach), Mio (testament), maria, (testament), yuki (testament), kurumi (testament), Asia (dxd), irina (dxd), Le fay Pendragon (dxd ), Chisato (testament), Ingvild, Xenovia, Ravel, and rosseweisse.

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