It's a great story that is quickly becoming one of my favorites. Although the grammar was pretty horrendous at the start it has become readable even for someone that is pretty critical towards the later chapters. It has a very good story development and decent writing if you look past the grammar. Overall very enjoyable for me and I think everyone should give it a try. If you can bear with the grammar I think most people will thoroughly enjoy it.
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Deepsea:Hi i would like to ask at what chapter does the grammar improve? I’m at chapter 22 and it is still a chore just to understand what was said...
Ryxvert:at what chapter does it become better coz im still early now
well drop it then... hopefully author will gramerly or use ms editor to fix the early chapter and ch to come
Deepsea:It does not
Ryxvert:well drop it then... hopefully author will gramerly or use ms editor to fix the early chapter and ch to come