Review Detail of Abendfeuer in Be happy with sports

Item: Be happy with sports
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

AbendfeuerLv145yrAbendfeuer

I cant say alot about this story because I didnt get further than the first chapter... the grammar just kulled my reading spirit and i couldnt go on From other reviews it seems like the story itself is praiseworthy, but I will have to wait until the author finds an editor. Please fix your grammar!!!

Be happy with sports

goodlion

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goodlionAuthorgoodlion

I'm looking for, in the other chapters the quality improves a little and has more words.

5yr

AbendfeuerLv14Abendfeuer

Would be happy if you remembered me when you find a editor and tell me😊

goodlion:I'm looking for, in the other chapters the quality improves a little and has more words.

5yr