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m1sa
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Overall its good the story developed in a good way but the way he train is just insane and it feel Like he would be a pro already but I know that its a fantasy ich novel so it just bugging me and I dont mind it that much. I know people commented on the grammar but it really suck and I knew it is hard to write english too cuz English my second language. Like I get the overall sentence and stuff cuz I read google translation chinese novel. It just need a bit of editing sentence strcuture and it will be good, so if you trust me I would like to edit your work for you.

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Be happy with sports

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Well you have a point that it would help a lot to edit the chapters, but if your scentence structure and english is onthe same level as inyour review here I think you dont qualify as an editor...