Great story, I was really surprised at how good it is. The description said system and we have a system, it said sport we have the sport. I just would like for it to be updated more as it is very good!
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I viewed this totally seriously, you seemed like a competent person. But.
Hello, I would like to do some basic grammar editing for your story, if that's fine with you? You don't even have to pay me.