Item: Saiyan In Devil Deminsion
Rating: 1
Author: IhaveWings

IhaveWingsLv145yr

2019-03-29 02:15

Fuck all the mother****ers that said that story brings the best of bdz world and dxd world. It doesn't its just a children's anime where the main character just sits there and takes a beating then through fucking feelings he gets all powerful and beats the villian **** that a story that brings the best of both worlds is where the mc is a mix of madara,hajime,yu illah, gillagmesh and izen but a guy with the character of this people and you get god mother****ering world slayer the opinion I give for the story is for the author to drop it and rewrite it but make gohan more brutal,calculative,decisive and low key since its after fighting cell after losing everything that changes people and since he has no one to long out for him he has to figure things out himself and ONE MORE THING saiyans DONT get nightmares understand the facts they live to fight with no consequence not live with emotions like guilt, grieve and remorse goku has died alot of times but cames back as it was nothing his family died his killed his brother they feed off emotions to get stronger its not the other way around this is the saiyan nature the saiyan way and although trunks had a human nature he still followed this rule

Saiyan In Devil Deminsion

Andrewstewart002

4.2

25 Chs

Liked by 8 people

Replies2

DarkKnight32Lv6

Bro you need to understand that gohan is not a brutal and evil kind of mc he is a easy kind and a bit of cocky guy. If you dont like his personality i dont get way you even started to read this because its gohan who got transported to highschool dxd not some kind of brutal mc that you like

5yr

IhaveWingsLv14

I am not saying that gohan has to be brutal and evil no whats irks me is that this gohan wasn't reborn but transported from another world to another, this gohan has gone through loss,grief,pain and hasn't changed he's not improve he just gets stronger like so ordinary anime mc through bonds of friendship and crap if wanted that I would go see anime not read fanfic's and we are talking about him after fighting cell no about him going to school finding love finding peace no we are talking about the gohan whom we do anything to fight to win to kill to save his loved ones even at cost of his life that changes a person you don't remain the same after that and that whats pissed me off caused the author failed to catch that part and introduce it about him. What just happened here is just switching Issei's character with his opposite and just copy paste what he has achieved but in a better way. And the title read's Saiyan in Devil Deminsion have you seen how saiyan fights they fight for the glory, for the joy of it they just basically a stronger Zaraki without the nonsense about sealing or discarding the powers they have, they use everything they have to fight and win and thats what gohan just did and thats why read this book I thought that this will be like how Dominating with one intent-fanfic will be like cause in all fanfic's no in life we change,we adapt, we evolve and this what saiyan is

DarkKnight32:Bro you need to understand that gohan is not a brutal and evil kind of mc he is a easy kind and a bit of cocky guy. If you dont like his personality i dont get way you even started to read this because its gohan who got transported to highschool dxd not some kind of brutal mc that you like

5yr

Other Reviews

DarkKnight32Lv6

This is a gold mine!!! The character development is great the relationship between mc and his girls is also very much to my likeness. Mc is no side kick for issei and thats what i like. There is not much to talk a out the story the chapters are long and i love it. I hope author continues with it a d one day he will be in top 10 i just hope he adds a picture to the novel this way he would get more viewers

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Neo_RagnarLv14

This story Has the best of both DBZ and DXD. Been waiting for a story like this. Writing is really good with extensive content. Nice character build up is there, it doesn't feel rushed to me. Over-all this is a really really good story. The only thing that I wish now for is the Author to not to Drop this without finishing it pretty please.

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DarkKnight32Lv6

Not a bad novel he got the personality of gohan really good romance is 5/5 btw it harem. I dont recommend this to those who dont like gohan personality in dbz because he is exactly the same here he is a lot similar to his dead but he still kills and is serious when it comes to fights also gets triggered when someone threatens his gf lol vali got what he deserves he got owned my mc xD anyways hope this boosts the novel ratings

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TheOneAboveAlllLv4

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Kaiser0000Lv6

Did you get the original author permission to post this? From what i can see probably all the stories you are posting aren't yours. .........................................

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ReviewGiver22Lv3

Keep up the good work i love it!!!!! There is nothing that i really want to say the update rate is great the character build up is awesome story is also good hope that author brings all of the leaders back to dragon ball universe when the tournament of power starts let them see what true power is xD and also hope he introduce krilln to them xD

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Lee_linLv13

Best story ever please don't drop plz plz plz don't drop don't drop 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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La6Lv3

If you are expecting gohan, ur in the wrong place, the MC is literally some random guy with Gohan memories and saiyan body but with none of his characteristics.

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