Item: Zhanye Black - [Being rewritten]
Rating: 2
Author: NihilisticBeauty

NihilisticBeautyLv56yr

2019-04-02 12:00

Writing quality- **** grammar, makes me feel nauseous.- 1 star Stability of Updates- just found it, so no clue- it's a five automatically Story Development- I don't understand anything. Also, he meets a pretty Korean girl, and, a chap or so later, he comes from a fat ugly dude to a handsome muscular dude. -meh. 2 stars. Not bad to the point of hell, but, well. Character Design- Proceeds to tease Korean girl who he met for... say, a few days? Or maybe a month or so, Idek. "You want it, baby?" or something like that. Really, "baby", don't use that, cringey as hell, and usually, it's a thug character or harassing person that uses that line.-1 star. World Background- I don't understand this. What's going on. I really don't know. Mostly all of this is because of the **** grammar. Use a grammar checker or something. I don't know.

Zhanye Black - [Being rewritten]

Zhanye

2.8

37 Chs

Liked by 18 people

Replies6

cultivatorbluebeanLv6

man next time save some time and just say that it sucks :D:D:D

6yr

cultivatorbluebeanLv6

from description only it shows 0 grammar skills and terribly cliche scenario or should i say almost same plot as im really a superstar??

6yr

NihilisticBeautyLv5

No, IRASS had better grammar, was less annoying, even a bit less wish fulfillment, and had less annoying characters. Yeah, IRASS was a tad bit better....

cultivatorbluebean:from description only it shows 0 grammar skills and terribly cliche scenario or should i say almost same plot as im really a superstar??

6yr

StupidEditor021Lv1

Pedophile bad grammar lol

4yr

Quarente_NaLv1

he writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

4yr

Mel111222Lv1

WE ARE NOT BOTS! THIS IS 100% REAL AND YOU CAN SEARCH FOR IT YOURSELF. The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15. Please report and DO NOT consume his content! HE'S A PEDO AND AN ARROGANT MAN!

4yr

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