Review Detail of Monarchtime in Luxurious Life of Jack Wayne

i cant leave a review with only 2 chapters. if i based it on only two chapters then i would leave an inaccurate review whether negative or positive. Eitherway looking at the chapters i've just read, i would leave a rather negative review. The chapters are very vague and short. Not only does the attainment of the system not have any build-up the beginner package is frankly too overpowered to even keep my interest. The reason i read books is for the journey of power, fame, riches, etc. The Mc literally has almost no sense of reaction when he gained the system, he woke up, wondered who was there, then said system. realized he gained a billion pounds and went to have breakfast. You said he was shocked but gave almost no dialogue or thought to prove he was shocked. In the second chapter you stated information in order to set the scene, but you did it in a way that destroyed the story. 'by the way' and 'also' is not a good way to insert information within a narrative whether first person or third person. you could've shown the genius of the Mc by having him go to school or an offhand remark from his parents, You could've also informed us about the parents name by having another parent say their name in order to get their attention. there is no need to make those little tid bits which are clearly not a part of the story when you can build the story. THAT IS ALL! thank you for reading.