Review Detail of CocoaButter in Story of a Big Player from Gangnam

I was excited at first when I read the fact that this novel would be realistic and not fantasy/reincarnation type of novel. However, reading the novel was very bland tbh. Usually it is the character that makes the story boring for me but this time the pace, story building and the structure language of the novel was disappointing to say the least. There isn't much description, there is a lot of conversations but it doesn't fit with the surroundings. The character building was unsuccessful. Even if the protagonist was a loser, at least the author was making enough effort to make the readers have that impression. In this case the character is just there. He just exists. I have nothing else to add.