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Noey_79
Noey_79Lv105yr
2020-01-23 23:20

I love this story.. simple love story of a people who has a bad past about love. How to mend your broken heart..how to start believing that you deserve to be loved nd to loved... how you have to take that first step to move on.

Ghost of My Heart (Move Into New Link)

JenzalexSnail
4.7
18 Chs

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JenzalexSnail
JenzalexSnailAuthor

Thank you for your review.

5yr
JenzalexSnail
JenzalexSnailAuthor

Thank you for your review.

5yr
Noey_79
Noey_79Lv10

You're wery welcome....but author...where is the updates?? 🤗🤗🤗

JenzalexSnail:Thank you for your review.
5yr
JenzalexSnail
JenzalexSnailAuthor

Already post 4 chaps at the moment.

Noey_79:You're wery welcome....but author...where is the updates?? 🤗🤗🤗
5yr
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marjzach2012
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This is a very good story. Got me hooked to it right away. The writing skills of the author seemed to be so professional in doing so. For no grammar errors so far. Everything is perfectly described as like I am watching a suspense story, but I was reading it instead. Keep it up author. I am definitely gonna continue reading this... 😊

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Vanzie836
Vanzie836Lv11

author jenzalex😭 where are you? its been a year since u updated. I really miss all the characters over here. I wanna know what will happen to jennet and hue and thier twins😭. This is one of the books that really got me so so sooooo engross. I love this fantasy book of yours❤ like im always telling u....from the very first time that i read this novel i love this already. I told u i wish i have a "ghost" husband😂🤣. Hope to hear from u soon. If ur having a hardtime on ideas just hit me up...Bravezavien Heartorcios in fb and msgr and lets share ideas. You know i dont know how to write a book like you do😂. Have a great day dear author😘

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_BoredToDeath_
_BoredToDeath_Lv4

The novel is good New type of male lead😂👌 Intresting side characters 😁 Just need steady updated coz that's the only flaw in this novel..........

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raeliz_shelton
raeliz_sheltonLv14

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Sonja_Haven
Sonja_HavenLv13

So far I love this book. I started it simply to kill time but now I'm actually getting into it. Kinda confused as to what the guy is. Apparently similar to a ghost till he regains his form?

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Jasvelis_Hernandez
Jasvelis_HernandezLv13

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ClaireYsabella
ClaireYsabellaLv3

Thoughtfully crafted with cliffhangers in the right places, this is a story to watch out for. One editorial suggestion, though: there are certain areas in the prose that may be worth revisiting for the purpose of correcting the typos and some errors in punctuation, grammar, and tense consistency. These errors, however, do not so much distract from the story. Please keep on writing. I'm obsessed with how the story arcs will turn out. :)

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Clowniac
ClowniacLv4

Alright, so, as promised, here's my take on your story! There aren't a lot of glaring grammar issues, which is honestly a great success on this site, so well done. Romance isn't really my thing, but I am already seeing the makings of a good, mysterious romance boiling in the background. You aren't immediately rushing into anything, which is great. Two things I suggest that I think will improve your writing: First, English verb conjugation is complicated, and I've noticed a decent number of times you used the wrong verb tense, or at least a less than ideal verb tense when describing a character's action. I would be sure to double check these to make sure they are spot on. Second, you tell us a lot of what a character is doing, but don't "show" them doing it. There is a concept in English writing called "active voice" that makes writing more dynamic. I would suggest looking into it if you really wanna take your writing to the next level. Hope this helps!

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ggone_
ggone_Lv3

The synopsis, hands down, was very intriguing! Additionally, the plot was already enough to hook me in. The ML in the story doesn’t seem to be completely the scary, dominant type that’s usually seen in this site. It’s quite cute to see the ML being somehow childish :) Can’t wait to continue reading to see more interactions between them~ Kudos to the author for the great book and hard work! Writing Quality: The way the author constructed the sentences made it easy to read the book in a blink of an eye. Also, the scenes and characters were described in a way that’s easy for the readers to visualize. However, I do suggest the author to proofread some of the chapters due to the misuse of tenses in some parts. Overall, these mistakes doesn’t affect the overall presentation of the book. Stability of Updates: As far as I’ve seen, the updates don’t seem that frequent. It’s understandable since the author didn’t promise the readers a schedule (if i checked the book correctly). Story Development: The pace of the story is definitely something to take note of. It’s not too slow nor too fast. The story is heading to a great direction which makes it even better. With the plot, characters, and amount of chapters posted, this definitely wouldn’t disappoint future and current readers!

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