"Janet turned her body ..." in my opinion, somehow my hearing is hurt. Before entering a new place, we usually read a prayer to exorcise evil spirits and smoke a place with adrospan, which also expels the forces of darkness ... and even listens to a good remedy for viral infections ... somehow had to say something. Old rituals and traditions, it is possible that anahranism, but helps to protect yourself from any unwanted presence. In ancient times, people were wiser. The Japanese, for example, held in front of the entrance to the house, dried peach fruits, which drove away the dark forces. The first sentences of the first chapter already capture the reader. IMHO the author managed to very beautifully show the presence of otherworldly forces. And this is only the first chapter! Although, of course, the choice of a glass villa, without bullet-proof glass, away from civilization, without high walls ... or good neighbors ... emptiness ... and the forest ... which in itself, begs for trouble in the future. intriguing ... this is real magic ... chapter two. It is read easily, without *******, the story develops smoothly ... well-built dialogue, it is interesting to read! With such a guard, and all fears remain outside the villa))) The phone is the greatest achievement of mankind ... this is also a flashlight. and radio and the main alarm clock !!! not that the monsters of the industrial age, which shook your soul out of you ... unlike the calm and confident call that gently but persistently wakes a tired student or techie, on new working days - sorry for offtopic. One man in a big house at the edge of the forest? This is clearly not very safe! You need an armed Android system, with total coverage of perimeter security. Multi-level ... I'm sorry ... I watched movies about survivalists ... offtopic. I note that the author managed to soothe a special atmosphere of presence in the house. There is also humor ... This is more like a horror movie ... a witch ... a ghost ... Some anxious ghost ... I have never read this before. Although ... it looks like the Chinese stories of the 17th century. But Tay was scary, but here is such a nice ghost. The novel is original, not a copy or a remake, it adds to its appeal. Written in a very lively language. It is easy to read, from the first to tenth chapter, how to drink a glass of water in the summer heat. It's refreshing! Arabs say, first choose a good neighbor, then build a house. And then the main character, some very suspicious neighbors, some kind of sect? Tin, however! But the author is able to catch up with the fog and create a twisted intrigue !!! I am glad that there are still more than 40 chapters, an interesting novel, this is a special gift, a special genre. And humor, and horrors and everyday meetings. The author, as I noted earlier, succeeds in colorful dialogues. Reader, if you want to read something new, refreshing, intriguing and written from the heart, then this novel is just the best for this description! Thanks to the author for her sparkling humor and hard work! We are waiting for updates! With thanks
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