Overall the story is good. The beginning was a bit slow and hard to get through, but as the chapters grew, the momentum and quality started to pickup. We know about the characters and their backgrounds, but we don't know about them personally except what they feel now. The world development has a lot of potential to grow, but it's not there yet. If it's developed too fast the story will go to shit with the current scale, too slow and nothing happens. It's beginning to make more sense, but we currently only know two cities, one village, and the MC's inner space. The world set up could be better because don't really know what races there are, where they're placed, or even a general outline of the continent or world. The quality is good, but it still needs more time to make sense and mature.
InsanelyParanoid
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LIKERainbow225:Been saving up and now need to catch up with fast passes
Gotta ask, but which chapter is Di Xun brought back in? You can't just leave her in the starting town after all
InsanelyParanoid:Saving up for 7 months, that's truly an old man here! Holy moly ;D
Rainbow225:Gotta ask, but which chapter is Di Xun brought back in? You can't just leave her in the starting town after all
Author can i ask you something????? After 62 chapter does your story get more detail......... I know it was your first novel so we can't accept much....... But still does it get better??? it was very hard for me to read up untill nowđ©đ©đ© â Why not drop this????â Bz i want to continue read this........
InsanelyParanoid:Chapter 287 - and from this point she ain't leaving Xue Ren.