Review Detail of Rxel in Myriad Shadows

Lovely. From the summary to the current chapter, I was hopelessly drawn in. I ached when Rosella ached, and my heart went out to her. Strong, dignified and resolute. The kind of Female Protagonist I love the most! Although the story is not too far in yet, I feel overwhelming potential from it, and it was a remarkably enjoyable read. I loved how the scenes drew me in and made me feel like I was there beside them. Just a suggestion, but for the title of 'YOUR BETRAYING LOVE' you may consider changing it to 'Your Betraying Love' instead. Reading it in caps made me feel like Rosella was shouting at me, whereas with the smaller caps it feels more like cutting words and a calm tone instead. Love the story! Keep up the good work, author! :)