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2019-04-02 03:10

This novel is absolutely pathetic..... It was like I was reading a children's book were everything was simplified and summarized and here are some things that pissed me off 1. I thought it was during the old time, if so how did he know what video games are. 2. He was supposed to be blind but....he doesn't act blind at all....he doesn't even hide the fact that he could see 3.he actually removed the eyes and tested his strength and actually saw I mean actually saw that his strength was back to normal 4.he just told his friend that he wanted to run way and he was like sure.....I'm behind you 5.he just stole from the clan leader with relative ease .....I still have a long list but hey.....

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