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DawnJester
DawnJesterLv135yr
2019-05-18 18:09

This shizz real good. But i see a problem with world building in earth. My solution to that is let nexus train eddie even if it's just a glimpse every arc from eddies perspective. Just so we understand more about the current earth.

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO

matanman
4.3
77 Chs

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_Neith_
_Neith_Lv15

To be honest I expected this story to be terrible or for the grammar and plot to be all over the place. And for that I do apologize I did not expect for it to be a hidden gem. As of chapter 9 where you have written up to for us readers to enjoy the story is flowing very smoothly and while there are a lot of cliches, they are put in such a way that even though we know them they are actually enjoyable to read. I'm definitely looking forward to more from you if you are serious about this story and don't drop it or start to rush your chapters and give us half baked nonsense. Then this is looking to be a new favorite of mine. I saw you had no reviews and since I've never reviewed a story I thought hey why not do a first for the both of us. You have a great story here and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Have fun and for anyone reading this I hope you enjoy it as much as I have.

5yr

Warlock235
Warlock235Lv13

This is definitely a hidden gem. Though it has an op protagonist, it uses it in a very good way. Definitely read this if you like a novel with gaming elements and a lazy but powerful protagonist.

5yr
Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv13

I never understand those that like things like this.. "No world boss dont brother me Ibonly want ingredients for cooking" Novels where the MC is op and is given always the best option but refuses because he is going on another path for comedy and stuff, bla bla bla This type of novel just isn't for me, it's straight boring, would prefer a normal slice of life at that point.

5yr
Sedyix
SedyixLv10

I think it will take very little time for this novel to receive the recognition it deserves...........................................................

5yr
Monstererupter
MonstererupterLv13

An interesting read to say the least, if you like stories with an OP MC, then this is the book for you. Sadly, it doesn't get any updated anymore.. It's still an amazing book nonetheless. :)

4yr
Pon4o
Pon4oLv5

The grammar is so bad it's giving me a headache so I'm stopping here. I like the concept and it may have become one of me faves but the grammar and lack of care from the author to even try and fix it is killing it for me. It's one thing to spell a word wrong or to use the incorrect time but having missing words or phrases on top of all that just makes the sentences so annoying to decifer, that even my correct- as-I- read brain cannot keep up. That just means the writer didn't make an effort to even read the chapters a second time. Not being a native English speaker or having it as a second language is not an excuse for lasiness.

5yr
MiasmaLotus
MiasmaLotusLv15

honestly it really sucks, that you stopped updating g the book is a great story, kinda wish it went slower. other that that it is an amazing story.

3yr
Scholar_of_Dawn
Scholar_of_DawnLv4

Well, i will say this story is a good one , honestly i thought this wi be boring, because the typical story with strong mc from start is good only at start but wil be bad later. For now let say that this story have a good start and if the author can hold this to the end, this will be a great novel

5yr
Flowing_River_Core
Flowing_River_CoreLv5

The MC is being led around by the nose, and the author says he is an idiot from the beginning and it really shows. It is so aobvious that its infruraiating. The story capitalizes on the MCs stupidity to further the plot by scamming, tricking, and misleading the MC with terrible vagueness that only he would fall for. It is a really well made story, if you don't mind the MC being lead around and not taking intiative. He mopes around about a past that he was determined to leave behind. The synopsis and intro came of as presenting this as a slice of life novel, where we watch the MC explore the game world with minimal fighting. But nope he just gonna be thrown through the wringer again and become another 'HERO' Just my out look on it, will stop reading it,may come back to it when I feel I can put up with the idiocy of the MC.

3yr
blue_phoenix
blue_phoenixLv12

Its fun and all in the story except that MC easily gets dragged into things again and again making him look like an idiot even though he seems to be smart.

4yr
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