Review Detail of ThinkMicro2 in The Gamer's Apocalypse

I've read this novel before in SOL; I didn’t rate it high back then because there were a lot of spelling and grammar issues. I think he finally listened to us and got himself an editor, although I can still see some issues here and there but not as bad as the original version. Some of the chapters here are new or maybe the author added some new scenes. Without those glaring spelling problems, I can guarantee that this book is freaking awesome. I’ve read some of the comments and reviews here. I have to laugh, what the heck guys, it’s his freaking story, let him tell it the way he wants it. It’s not like you’re paying him to do it. If you know so much about writing a story then go ahead and write something on your own. Then let us criticize the hell out of it too.