Review Detail of AMaWEEb in Chairman of The Magic Council

This is my second review...His age is probably lowered to get younger girls...The girls and mc have near zero character development...English even though it’s not good but you can see improvement? Compared to previous fanfics.An literally his getting girls like pokemon but instead it just takes a longer period of time which is being wasted on the lifeless interactions 4example I like you but I’m too young.Oh yeah you’re too young .So and so blushed.But could be worst. Character development 1.5 Spelling 2.5 Story development or plot/creativity:1.5 Updating stability 4.5 World background 1