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Benjamin_
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I only made it to chapter 4 before dropping so I gave world background, and story development 3 stars. I wanted to rate them lower but I can't justify it because I didn't read enough to form an opinion on these 2 criteria. I rated stability of updates as 3 because I can't be bothered checking the chapter list to see how regularly he updates. writing quality is 3 because again I only made it to chapter 4 but I saw fair few grammatical errors. character design is 2 because the mc is 4 yet the author described his penis it was very creepy, not only that but the characters aren't his apart from his mc so none of the design is actually his. Whilst the 1 character we do see is mostly in tune with the Ur we see in fairy tail there are instances where she's not. for example she agrees with the mc that he'd be too perfect if he learnt magic. this isn't something Ur would agree with. Now to the main reasons why I rated this so lowly -the author is creepy and describes 4 year old penises - the mc was a lawyer in his past life but doesn't act like he was one - the mc says cringy **** like how he'll make Ur happy and marry her in 15 years when at no point has Ur shown any interest in him but ofc it'll happen cos author wants it to. this is very creepy. - the mc says dumb**** like he doesn't need to learn magic because he'll be too perfect and how he can live a good life from just plagiaring novels and whatnot (yet it seems he can't even recognise he's in the fairy tail universe) -referring back to the mc being a lawyer in his past life. One would assume he's reasonably smart since he was a lawyer right? Wrong. He sees magic but is still shocked to find out he's not on earth after learning where he is and the year. TLDR: 4 chapters in and the author is being creepy. The mc is saying lame, dumb, and cringy ****. He's not acting his profession but is rather acting like a complete and utter child, rather fitting since he is one but isn't consistent with what the author tells us about the mc. Finally, he's only known Ur for a short amount of time and he's already trying to be a simp.

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Chairman of The Magic Council

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After_Wing
After_WingLv6After_Wing

Dropped this as well. The author turned into an asshole idiot in defending an asshole bitch.

ThousandRain
ThousandRainLv11ThousandRain

I agree. The 5 year old Mc was terrible for me. I think the author had a strange fetish about his love interest

Mad_Hatter2
Mad_Hatter2Lv3Mad_Hatter2

He probably reads loli and shotacon hentai

TheOnlyKing
TheOnlyKingLv4TheOnlyKing

Thank you for the warning, definitely won't be reading this anymore....

raffi_pasyadana
raffi_pasyadanaLv3raffi_pasyadana

Ya have to dropped this is just creepy

DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4DragoPackMan

lol 70th like