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LINTYWEB
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This story comes with a refreshing and different style. Although I have read not so many romance stories on webnovel and have browsed some , most of these have similar pattern and plot. But this story is different. So many thing are developing and I am enjoying my reading so much that I lost track of time.. Sadly I am at this chapter and will now wait for the updates.. Only comment is the use of pronouns he, his, him, her, she interchange with the gender of the subject and a few minor grammar errors as well but over all I am happy with the story. Dear writer, since this is your first I am commending you for this story. Congratulations on your future endeavor.

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We are destined.Let me pamper you

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I know I am juggling between pronouns... such a silly mistake is making me feel embarrassed. I'am trying hard not to do this stupid mistake.... but thanks for reading my book despite these annoying mistakes... I have started editing... soon they will all be removed...🙂