Review Detail of Lil_beast in Return to Paradise

Till now (only 1 chapter): - it seems to be the start of a great story, something about loss, regret, new love and moving on in life There are a few errors ( I only found 2 in the first chapter, so they don't really matter)(but I myself am not a native English speaker, so what do I know😅💁‍♀️) Maybe if there are more chaps, I'll start reading it again