Review Detail of snowman in Everything system DROPPED

It is not the worst thing that I read is much better than many stories, fanfics that I read that really were ****, but this story or fanfic had its own touch although a little slow at the beginning and a bit hastily grammatically I liked it, I feel that this story or fanci has quite a big potential but still enjoy reading it even if you have dropped it I hope to see more stories or fanfics of yours: D