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The whole thing read as the following: MC: sistem can you get/give/create (thing) Sistem: yes i can my king/master/owner etc Mc woah thank you Sistem nothing much you are such a great/smart/powerfull etc Every single fucking time , the dialogue is that, every action is like the mc is asking the sistem for aprovation or its described as such, even the most mundane of them. The mc created a world and wants to explore it, He literally asks the sistem what is in the word, instead of showing it he proceds to decribe it to mc... My dude you dont need a sistem to get a description of a fantasy world. The mc got a sistem in exchange for his brain or something.

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You don't have to worry about this ****ty novel because I'm dropping it. Thanks for pointing out the reasons why I should.