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johnmyth
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I feel like this story is for people who hate the main character from the original story(yun che). The biggest arguments against him is usually the killing too many people thing(burning heaven clan) and the "" rape "" I use quotation marks because I'm totally on the side of If I need to do this for you to survive ill do it. In other words life over chastity. And for the most part anybody who argues against it is an idiot. As for the heavy killing thing I feel like in cultivation oriented novels its definitely the right way to go otherwise you will suffer.Now don't get me wrong I completely had moments where I wanted to slap yun che for being reckless and stupid sometimes but overall I could appreciate the way he did things in general. Now I went into that simply because the story sounds so petty and its forced and awkward the way you did things. It felt like this to me: I don't like this guy, I'm gonna go into his world take away all his advantages that makes him strong in the future, give myself some really strong powers, and seduce and make most his future women mine. I felt that was petty. Now for the forced and awkward parts you kinda put yourself in the path yun che took when it was completely unnecessary like the fight with Murong Yi is completely meaningless when your so much stronger than him. Another thing is how you used normal tricks and changed the personalities of xia qingyue and chu yuecchan and ******* just to get them to like you and be in your harem. There were many things you used to get their attention and fondness to you that really wouldn't work on them. The last thing which is kinda weird is that I feel like the MC an this novel is " I'm an alpha, hear me roar, I'm gonna have really cool powers get into fights and bang hot chicks:" which is totally fine with me as long as it doesn't start to not make a lot of sense. But the way the MC comes off feels like one of those "Arrogant young master" personalities except he's actually strong. Apart from that your writing and updates are good which is really important for an author.So good luck with this novel and future works hopefully.

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The Great Journey With a System

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I was also thinking the same thing. And the author is basically following the same plot with very little changes. I hope that he can do something unique

johnmyth
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Yea its like you have access to so many cool powers and things which you could have a cool story with powerful enemies and hot girls and different places but instead your following the story line of the old main character and beating up weaklings meaninglessly just because. It kinda feels like " I'm gonna do everything yun che did and show how much better I am at it than he did because I have access to the system and knowledge of everything he's done."

pratiksymbol
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Hey check out my ATG fic. I got my ideas from this fic but I believe you will really like it

johnmyth:Yea its like you have access to so many cool powers and things which you could have a cool story with powerful enemies and hot girls and different places but instead your following the story line of the old main character and beating up weaklings meaninglessly just because. It kinda feels like " I'm gonna do everything yun che did and show how much better I am at it than he did because I have access to the system and knowledge of everything he's done."
pratiksymbol
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Hey check out my ATG fic. I got my ideas from this fic but I believe you will really like it

johnmyth:Yea its like you have access to so many cool powers and things which you could have a cool story with powerful enemies and hot girls and different places but instead your following the story line of the old main character and beating up weaklings meaninglessly just because. It kinda feels like " I'm gonna do everything yun che did and show how much better I am at it than he did because I have access to the system and knowledge of everything he's done."