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WhoWATTwhereWhenWh
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I am currently at the latest chapter (61). I am actually not a huge fan of 'romance' between Mesa and other characters. They say that they 'love' him but they 'love' him in the first place only because Mesa is overpowered; which is not really love. I would rather Mesa move away from materialistic attachments and find meaning for himself; to grow as a character. Please make him tell his thots to f*** off no matter how cold it may seem. I would rather jerk off in p***hub than read s*x scenes. - Writing quality is good (4/5) -Updates are good (4/5) - Story development is meh (2/5) : Explain to me why God loves him so much (I don't care about karma... he could have molested dogs after microwaving them for all I care) : I personally hate Gods (not counted in this rating (i did not mark you down for this as this is a popular trope)) : Mesa's whole life seems meaningless; go to one place show them I am strong, f**k some b*tch*s, go to another place show them I am strong, f**k some b*tch*s... at some point he should realize that all is for none... he should grow tired and commit seppuku (I would). -Character design : meh (2/5) : Maybe against the God's has superficial characters so I can't blame you here but the men usually seem very prideful and the women are very greedy and bi**hy; a bit like the real world. Conclusion: Real world has sh**tty character design. MY OPINION MATTERS SO LISTEN TO ME; sorry I am a prideful person and I have a sh**tty character design. -World Background : Okay (3/5) : The world exists. I don't know what more to say but it just looks like a 3/5. It's like looking at someones face; it's hard to explain whether someone is attractive or not.

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Lost_0ne
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Thanks for this review, due to this and the prologue I can tell this novel is just another hentai rebranded so I'll be removing it from my list. As well as the fact that the MC seems like he's going to be a whiny, cliche, holier than thou type of person who blames everything/ everyone else for his problems. (At least that's the vibe I'm getting)

WhoWATTwhereWhenWh
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It has good and bad parts. The good part is that there are no 'struggles' he is op which I like. The bad part is his attitude and his overemphasis on viewing women as sex objects. I just want an op novel which has mc like saitama or someone who is smarter and thinks through things rather than someone who just wants to live for some boring pleasures.