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Etiger789
Etiger789Lv154yrEtiger789

I sort of like the story but the mc is all kinds of ****ed up.I get people hated yun che becouse he did manipulate kill and also rape one of his future wives.But doing and torturing and putting him throgh this and also manipulating the mc's future wives is no fucking difrent if not worse then what yun che did.yes he killed alot but who hasent in that kind of world and environment.yes he manipulated but he cared and risked his life for them.The mc is just basically going after what yun che would have.it just feels like childish and petty jealousy gone beyond yandere wifu level.it dosent even feel like the Mc will love them only goes for them becouse of there beauty. He goes from being a hero saving a little girls life to being reincarnated as roach as he was a hero to manipulating xia qingyue with lies about being a self proclaimed hero to then torchering and tormenting Yun che mentally for I don't even no because he hadn't even said why he's don't it or why he hates yun che.so it's kind of ****ed up.but hey that's what fan fiction are these days. So even tho people may like this type of genre it's not for me. P.S And author if your resulting on deleting people's truthful opinions about you novel like my last review it means your insecure and dont like to see bad coments and reviews.And if so just think and read the reviews of all the people who do like you story and ignore the bad ones.you may think becouse I'm giving a low rating that I'm belittling your hard work because thats not the case at all.its just that I don't like this particular story structure and the Mc's personality. You have great sentence structures.good punctuation you have thought of your plot and had it planed out unlike some where they just write it on the spot.(guilty as charged 😅😅😅)So have more confidence.good luck with you novel.

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Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6Hentai_Senchou

I was under the impression that he only 'tortured' Yun Che as payment for the sky poison pearl and samsara mirror. Without them Yun Che won't get strong at all, so he gave him some motivation in the form of hatred and revenge. Itachi intentionally waited until sasuke was watching to kill his parents and then 'tortured' him in the same way, all to make him stronger. Or was that a different ATG novel with almost the exact same premise?

johnmyth
johnmythLv5johnmyth

No the payment for the treasures was a pill that fixed his meridians and opened all 54 profound entrances. He "tortured" yun che so that he can make use of him later in the future.

ToulueVang
ToulueVangLv4ToulueVang

Idc. Yun Che is a fcken dumbass pussy anyway. I don’t get the hype for atg

Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6Hentai_Senchou

Yun che would have gotten the evil gods profound veins if "itachi" didn't steal the sky poison pearl and samsara mirror, and "itachi" knows that. You can't WAAAY underpay someone for something and say you paid them for it. It's like in movies when gangsters offer you a dirt cheap amount of money to move out of your house and break your legs if you don't do it. He did the exact same thing to sasuke with the intention of making his stronger using hatred and revenge as motivation.

johnmyth:No the payment for the treasures was a pill that fixed his meridians and opened all 54 profound entrances. He "tortured" yun che so that he can make use of him later in the future.
johnmyth
johnmythLv5johnmyth

That's exactly what he is doing. He acts like a thug or stupid young master from chinese novels except he's actually strong because of the system. He doesn't think or act like "Itachi" at all. He's "motivating" yun che simply to drag him around to show off his accomplishments with the excuse that he needs him for something knowing that he wont be able to do anything against him.

Hentai_Senchou:Yun che would have gotten the evil gods profound veins if "itachi" didn't steal the sky poison pearl and samsara mirror, and "itachi" knows that. You can't WAAAY underpay someone for something and say you paid them for it. It's like in movies when gangsters offer you a dirt cheap amount of money to move out of your house and break your legs if you don't do it. He did the exact same thing to sasuke with the intention of making his stronger using hatred and revenge as motivation.
RichBoyWinston
RichBoyWinstonLv3RichBoyWinston

I also don't see all the hype for torturing Yun Che every single damn ATG fic. And the MCs are often dicks just like Yun Che too. This is not only with ATG, every single fanfic people want to either kill, torture or cuck the original protagonist... Seriously, what the hell is wrong with people.

ToulueVang:Idc. Yun Che is a fcken dumbass pussy anyway. I don’t get the hype for atg
Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv10Primordial_Phoenix

Oh my God you have no idea how right you are that's especially prevalent in cultivation fanfics they're always raving about how they hate the MC for Mass genocide or raping some girl but then they do something just as bad if not worse 20 chapters later and then say this is Justice for what the original MCwould have done even though it hasn't even happened yet he could have tried to change the original MC into a better person or at least as good as a person can get in a cultivation world

RichBoyWinston:I also don't see all the hype for torturing Yun Che every single damn ATG fic. And the MCs are often dicks just like Yun Che too. This is not only with ATG, every single fanfic people want to either kill, torture or cuck the original protagonist... Seriously, what the hell is wrong with people.
FanfictionLover
FanfictionLoverLv3FanfictionLover

I also don't get why authors do that, I mean if you don't like the original MC then just ignore him, why torture and talk shit about being rightful and stuff when you do something as bad or more than what the original MC did? Imagine if people with this mindset really got powers in another world, then that world would surely be destroyed and in utter chaos. The hypocrisy is killing me.

Primordial_Phoenix:Oh my God you have no idea how right you are that's especially prevalent in cultivation fanfics they're always raving about how they hate the MC for Mass genocide or raping some girl but then they do something just as bad if not worse 20 chapters later and then say this is Justice for what the original MCwould have done even though it hasn't even happened yet he could have tried to change the original MC into a better person or at least as good as a person can get in a cultivation world
Fredy_89
Fredy_89Lv2Fredy_89

oh lol this is so true, when i read a todg fanfiction, and when i saw all of those comments they're hyping about killing nei li and torture him, tf bruh seriously what is wrong with y'all lmao

RichBoyWinston:I also don't see all the hype for torturing Yun Che every single damn ATG fic. And the MCs are often dicks just like Yun Che too. This is not only with ATG, every single fanfic people want to either kill, torture or cuck the original protagonist... Seriously, what the hell is wrong with people.
ExaltedCrow
ExaltedCrowLv13ExaltedCrow

Because it’s usually 2 situations. Either MC kills the original MC, because no one likes it when some asshole/rapist/schemer/whatever/protagnist is left alone just so he can make trouble for new MC later. Or 2. they became best buddies so hard they almost go have full on Anal Sex. Sure the author could go the ignore route, but then we usually still see the old MC like 50 chapters later doing some shit (which is not ignoring).

Fredy_89:oh lol this is so true, when i read a todg fanfiction, and when i saw all of those comments they're hyping about killing nei li and torture him, tf bruh seriously what is wrong with y'all lmao