I find this novel slightly interesting yet slightly cringy as there is a bit too much teenage angst for my liking. However what strikes me as interesting, and I don't know if the author intended it or not, is that the main character was in the military and almost seems to have a form of PTSD from his time there. If it's intentional my hat is off to the author and if not I suggest playing it that way and when you introduce the harem aspect you want you use the girls as a grounding/healing element for the MC to make him more normal.
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