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PotReapLv45yr
2019-03-13 04:33

I'm liking it so far. it seems to be a pretty good story. whether or not you make this into a harem is up to you, but I recommend that you do add a bit of romance because that is already portrayed in the comics.

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GhostyGodZ
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SuperVegeto
SuperVegetoLv13

The start of the novel is good but I hope you do continue because I don’t want to invest my tune and then you stop halfway threw. You have the potential to have something great here but please don’t stop or quit on us and don’t worry about creating a lot of new content you can always copy some of the original stuff just try to add your own twist because in the end that’s why we read these type of stuff because we have a ****ty day or we just want to relax and we read peoples work and I like it so far just keep it up and thank you

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Melshan
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Dwikex
DwikexLv4

if you keep updating all the power stones I will give you ... all the power stones I have,,,,,ok....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Wolfrunner
WolfrunnerLv14

I find this novel slightly interesting yet slightly cringy as there is a bit too much teenage angst for my liking. However what strikes me as interesting, and I don't know if the author intended it or not, is that the main character was in the military and almost seems to have a form of PTSD from his time there. If it's intentional my hat is off to the author and if not I suggest playing it that way and when you introduce the harem aspect you want you use the girls as a grounding/healing element for the MC to make him more normal.

5yr
Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv13

As long as you dont drop it :) BDO is committed to exceeding expectations on every engagement, big or small, for every client, local or multinational. BDO is committed to exceeding expectations on every engagement, big or small, for every client, local or multinational. (This is just for the 140-word, it's what I had already in my ctrl-v from before for an essay so who cares)

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KxV09
KxV09Lv14

Mc personality a little confusing, just like an annoying teenage brat, although technically he is actually one .....................5* for the BatDoms

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8Psycho
8PsychoLv5

I could only read single chapter as the writing quality is so bad. Therefore I do not have anything else to say about this story................................................ . .

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DragonGod100
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