Review Detail of niharikabhol in The Way of the Sword (BL)

The main character Song Yan is depicted quite nicely. The starting pace is a bit slow so that might cause some people to lose interest. But you need to stick through as the story moves at a gentle pace. The research work done for writing the part is good. But they're are to many details sometimes and it is easy to forget. So maybe you can introduce some detail in one chapter and few stuff related to it rather than giving all the details at once. But overall as the genre is quite different and the ground work is extremely good, I will give it full points for innovative thinking. Keep up the good work author. 😊