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ChallengeGod
ChallengeGodLv45yr
2019-08-15 20:53

Honestly, the story started off pretty good. The grammars and some spellings weren't proper but that doesn't really bother me as long as the story is good. However the disappointment struck when the lustful thoughts, also known as "harem-seeking" ideas of the author popped up immediately during the first time he goes to school. Honestly, I could still bear with that. However getting his butt kicked easily like that, then I'd say that the power given to him by some "Ancient One" who has some kind of favouritism for otakus was totally unworthy for him and only made the story even more f*cked up. You already nerfed his strength by making him not be able to control the hunters but the getting his *ss whooped part was very disappointing to say at least.

Original Hybrid - Teen Wolf Fan Fiction

DivineDemonLord
4.1
46 Chs

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Rildec
RildecLv11

Honestly this story is a fucking disappointment. The author goes after an audience who wants an op originals hybrid, and you give us some weak ass punk who gets one upped by a newborn vampire. If you're the type to go for dumb mcs who dont think things through and basically create his own enemies. Well here you go. I mean c'mon, arent you supposed to know when your pact is near you, or atleast have some control your followers? Instead mc is just a fool. If he wanted an easy life then he should have stayed away from beacon hills. Mc hasn't even used his hybrid form yet and barely any of the powers. And when he does try they dont seem to work. Only werewolf form and the booties mostly. Which is a damn shame considering he should know hes not strong enough in just his regular werewolf form which was proven quite early in his first fight with an alpha. Cock mf should be more careful. Any normal person would be extremely careful if they were in a world where they knew they werent all powerful. So i guess that goes to show DUMB MC

5yr

MochiKng97
MochiKng97Lv14

Just typical trash fanfic. If possible want to give negative stars. The ending for book 1 was so bad that AIDS couldnt even be compared to it. Garbage.

5yr
noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv14

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Daoistskyshaker
DaoistskyshakerLv15

What the **** man the mc got ***** slapped by one of his own because he is a dumb ass he does not deserve Nik power it's not only about power but brains I am done with this ****.

5yr
FrostFire
FrostFireLv13

It started of great, but the MC is just too weak and idiotic.

5yr
Melshan
MelshanLv7

The MC Will have a girlfriend or Harém. ..................................................................................................................................................................................

6yr
pjhel06
pjhel06Lv3

"My wish came true,this trash novel finally got kicked out of the 100's hopefully it get erased out of existence."***goes back to church and pray's***"why did u make it harem and forced a villain,stupid author."***he says in a very gentle and nice voice***................................................................ .............I WANNA GIVE U A MINUS STAR'S !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

5yr
DivineOverseer
DivineOverseerLv14

None of it makes sense, Need to check grammar and spelling. If you want to co-write I would enjoy that, contact me through my novel. The Original Tribrid -A Teen Wolf fan fiction.

5yr
Faceless_
Faceless_Lv13

Oh boy what a disappointing story. Please don't force your own facts that contradicts facts where you based your own fanfic. And a disappointing mc which is pathetically weak who's supposed to be OP. Making him a hybrid but forcing him to be weak makes no point in it. Goodluck to this novel.

5yr
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